Heavy summer rains
Prompted five tall boys to jump
In the mud puddle
Threw wet earth at each other
Even the cats want to join.
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dancing summer rains soaked the path with joyful boys…….. And to enjoy the delightful moment nature wanna to join d….. Superb enjoyable writings……fantastic 10++
There are many things we observe but can't quite get ourselves to do.
A delightful little poem! Today was a rainy day so it fits the atmosphere wonderfully! Thank you for sharing!
Childhood memories are roused in torrents.....! After the blistering summer days, when rain pours down from the sky, it is a matter of great excitement for everyone, especially for children who enjoy at the prospect of playing in the puddles! A lovely poem!
Playing along with the muse of the rain! ! Heavy downpour. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
That brings back memories! ! Children and mud! A match made in childhood heaven- -perhaps the last heaven people find on earth! I like the feeling this poem emits to the reader. 10++++