Summer Rains Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Summer Rains

Rating: 4.7


Heavy summer rains
Prompted five tall boys to jump
In the mud puddle
Threw wet earth at each other
Even the cats want to join.


Copyright2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 11 June 2020

That brings back memories! ! Children and mud! A match made in childhood heaven- -perhaps the last heaven people find on earth! I like the feeling this poem emits to the reader. 10++++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 June 2020

A well crafted terrific tanka. Simply wonderful.....10+++💗💗💗

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Kostas Lagos 09 June 2020

Lovely image.Well written

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 June 2020

dancing summer rains soaked the path with joyful boys…….. And to enjoy the delightful moment nature wanna to join d….. Superb enjoyable writings……fantastic 10++

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Shining Light 09 June 2020

A beautifully expressed poem.

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Rob Lamberton 24 August 2025

There are many things we observe but can't quite get ourselves to do.

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Timber Koleden 22 June 2025

A delightful little poem! Today was a rainy day so it fits the atmosphere wonderfully! Thank you for sharing!

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Valsa George 18 June 2020

Childhood memories are roused in torrents.....! After the blistering summer days, when rain pours down from the sky, it is a matter of great excitement for everyone, especially for children who enjoy at the prospect of playing in the puddles! A lovely poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 June 2020

Playing along with the muse of the rain! ! Heavy downpour. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 13 June 2020

Sweet memories of childhood, nicely penned as a poem

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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