Tears Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Tears

Rating: 4.8


Silver drops of pains
Act like sweepers of sorrows
Give way to calmness.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Saturday, October 10, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 10 October 2020

a beautiful poem Rose Marie, a gift in pleasure to read silver tears of pain in river flow, release sorrow dam of heart strings, blocking life current vibrant love, after flood torrent comes calm quiet waters

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 October 2020

A beautifully inked poem. Truly astounding....5 stars*****

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Sandra Feldman 11 October 2020

What's in a tear? Your poem, With wondrous words, Tells all, Beautiful, call! Every line stands alone, with a most enlightening golden tone. Truly outstanding! A poetic masterpiece of our times!

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Terry Craddock 17 October 2020

Sorrow Dam Heart Strings silver tears of pain in river flow release sorrow dam heart strings blocking life current vibrant love Inspired by the poem 'Tears' by the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin. Dedicated to the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin.

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Terry Craddock 17 October 2020

After Flood Comes Calm body sweats silver pain droplets heart bursts silver tears of pain in river flow release sorrow dam heart strings blocking life current vibrant love after shock flood surge torrent comes calm quiet water after flood torrent comes calm quiet Inspired by the poem 'Tears' by the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin. Dedicated to the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin.

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Nabakishore Dash 09 November 2021

gives rise to calmness.very exact.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 06 December 2020

Tears purge the the heart of its sadness.5 Stars!

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 November 2020

Tears-without any reservoir, it washes the heart of eyes and remove the painful dust!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 November 2020

Pains in our body result in tears, many tears, and when tears are rolling, a greatest relief and then give way to calmness. This is Beauty in its Brevity dear great Poetess.5 Stars Full Vote. To MyPoemList. God's Blessings for you dear friend

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 October 2020

I feel tip tap tip of buckets of pains of poetess here! But the droplets of pains are eventually put into the pool of calmness! The theme of pure love is inbuilt in this wonderful brief work. Top 🌟

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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