Scorching away the dark
In the distant east
What comes out
Spreading delight?
Breaking aloof
The smoky mist
And casting
The radiant rays?
The warming
Sunny face!
With a reddish
Golden smile
Wipes all negatives
Out of sight;
Brings in
Delightful feel to
Unknown realms of mind!
29 07 08
Good positive thinking. the sun smiles with a bright face everyday.
BRILLIANT! ..sparkling, rereshing like the morning sun! ..thank you for bringing this one to my attention.i really enjoyed the freshness of your crisp verse.: >
Exquisitely beautiful. Looks like a leaf out of some ancient scripture. Thanks for a fine treatment of the morning sun with a golden smile.
A sun imagery. I read our Sanskrit scriptures a lot. Thanks for your endearing words on poem Rajnish. Liked
Golden smile Wipes all negatives Out of sight; Rachel Ann Butler
This is a brightly-woven poem of happy and inspiring day! And my favorite word - smile! So take my sweetest smile for this wonderful write, my friend :)
A Smile bringing sunlight, joy and strength in this world.Let the radiant rays of your poetry shine on us :) Thanks for sharing. A.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderfil, and cheerful I like this alot.