Sunset In Sand Hill Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
Sunset In Sand Hill
Loose and granular appearance we see,
Particles of sand together have formed hill,
Gaining power from early sun in motion,
Now this hill says goodbye to today's sun.
With a faded appearance of pale orange sun,
Dropping down last few drops of emotion,
Telling about union and separation in love,
Time is busy in doing duty to invite dusk.
Today this hill is here and this dreams in joy,
Who knows when wind will blow very speedily?
Many granules will open wings to fly and move,
We may see a clear land instead of sand hill.
Sunset has written its last dream on hilltop,
Ridges of sand crown still sing about victory,
Particles are visible in mass of success of the day,
Coming and going is a common practice in life.
Sand hill swings and dances as spring wind blows,
Very old edentulous sun lastly mumbles to hide,
Telling about reincarnation of tomorrow's sunrise,
Sun says goodbye to sand hill and sand hill to sun.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,09 March 2018. All rights reserved.
An amazing poem that captures the beauty and wonders of nature. A thought provoking write. When the piece ventured on the aspects of love. emotion, joys and dreams, this nature.write comes alive. Beautifully crafted well executed write.10
A truly captivating poem Sir Kumar. Nature shares a bond that only they know in the cycle of life.10
Loved riding up and down sand hills to tire out an ornery horse. And enjoy the patterns of ripples that wind had drifted the sand into- -until my horse and I plowed through the middle. Excellent word choices every where in this lovely write.And I would love to write a line as fantastically perfect as- - ] Sunset has written its last dream on hilltop.10+++++++++++
Sand hill swings and dances! ! Facing the ways of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Sunset has written its last dream on hilltop, Ridges of sand crown still sing about victory, Wow Sir what a piece of work! I love the rhythm of this poem so much. It is closest to my heart. I also reside by a small hillock. I gaze Sunrises and Sunsets from its peak. Felt like I am with you atop. 10++++++++++ Subhas
Wow! Wonderful poem presents excellent sunset but picture does not adjust as setting sun is always reddish and yours one is white, anyway, the poem is greatly pennned, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10
Your poetic heart and vision sees and creates beauty of unmatched quality from Nature’s simple surroundings. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.
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Beautifully penned last few drops of emotions, union and separation of love at the time of dusk..10