Time of sunset has arrived, sun smiles,
Like an old man smiles without teeth,
As like as from edentulous mouth,
Words come unclear we feel of course.
Edentulous has sun become for setting,
But golden power has not yet fade again,
Calmness is sprinkled with gentle rays,
But still golden crown of victory is shining.
Seeing this beautiful scene over City Street,
Tow trucks facing each other are gossiping,
They are in mood to take little rest today,
Next day during sunrise they will travel.
Street lights are standing to taller to glow,
While dusk will ring the bell of darkness,
Trees are saying goodbye to sun and praying,
Sunset has created beauty in this lovely city.
Riding bikes, scooters and cycles few persons,
They are going to receive relatives at station,
Horn of evening train is blown for arrival,
Goodbye sun, they get joy meeting relatives.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,27 November 2017. All rights reserved.
Time of sunset has arrived, sun smiles, Like an old man smiles without teeth, Beautiful comparison sir, loved the initial lines so much. You have shown multiple dimensions of the Sun and His shades on human mind so nicely. Thanks my revered Sir for the sharing. Subhas
An interesting piece about nature, a city and its people. Nicely presented.
A lovely description of sunset and a serene mood, complete beautifully the day and the poem.
Street lights are standing to taller to glow, While dusk will ring the bell of darkness, Trees are saying goodbye to sun and praying, Sunset has created beauty in this lovely cit...horrible poetic expression.
Fall of sun below horizon elevates beauty, senses and mood of all souls living in this planet of earth where in succession comes wonders after wonders with which we are struck but can't tell why.........Kumarmaniji........ so beautifully composed and snap taken........thanks for sharing........10
Beautiful sunset sparkling in everyones life. Wonderful lines...While dusk will ring the bell of darkness.
Like an old man smiles without teeth, wonderful imagery is seen here, thanks for sharing, sir
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A nice poetic image, Mahakul sir. Nature's beauty is very attractive alongwith the animated images of train and human beings. Thanks for sharing.