* * * Sweet Tea Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

* * * Sweet Tea

Rating: 3.4


Roses do not grow in the garden more, might watering...

Winter in April has begun there, sometimes too meet...

Gardener sits silently near fire-place...was sadly filling...

Can be will help, he drinks of sweet tea with the sweetest biscuit...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Balch 25 April 2009

This is so lovely Tsira, the sun will again shine, regards Tom 10+

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Sadiqullah Khan 25 April 2009

He has the patence and hope. Tsira, is not it? 10

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Sandra Fowler 29 April 2009

An elegiac poem picture that lingers in the mind. Beautiful, Tsira. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Costa Anakiev 30 April 2009

Dear Tsira, again I like your wonderful ideas, but if you write in English, ple-a-se, don't forget the realities of this language (THE sweetest... and so on) . Konstantin.

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William Roberts 02 May 2009

I like the connection between gardens and gardeners.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

An event or a piece of environment is successfully penned. You always speak a lot with short keys words and that is your style. Your style of composition added a good value to your poems. This is a nice poem with multi-directional meanings. Love with 10

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Fiona Davidson 06 May 2009

The roses don't grow anymore and so the gardener takes solace in his sweet tea and biscuits...done that myself before now...wonderful write Tsira...Fi 10++++

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Anjali Sinha 06 May 2009

hey Tsira I cannot undersatnd the connection between sweet tea, biscuits, and roses whatever, since it comes from the lovely Tsira (a beautiful name) I guess its, as beautiful-- anjali

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Roland Bastien 05 May 2009

I am glad to see your works take that direction.....Pleasure into wisdom.....great Tsira

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 May 2009

Wonderful short poem with beautiful metaphor.

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