Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 147,330 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Taking Rest Again - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

A day has passed with birth
A day has passed with death
In middle, days are passed
In work we have seen love.

Feeling so tired we take rest
But restlessness is in work
We again develop and work hard
To sustain in life once more.

So many duties remain for next
Days remain and days dwell sure
With spreading of light we see
Nice style is adopted in mind.

Taking rest is our process far
This is universally designed
Cosmic law is set likewise
God has given chance for new.

Topic(s) of this poem: life and death, spiritual


Comments about Taking Rest Again by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/12/2016 2:27:00 AM)


    We need Rest In life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Edmund Strolis (1/9/2016 7:04:00 PM)


    Refreshing, the free will of the seeker can consciously begin anew.COSMIC LAW IS SET LIKEWISE. The rest, the cycle....new eyes to see through old tired prejudices and our human weakness. WITH SPREADING OF LIGHT WE SEE. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (1/9/2016 4:46:00 PM)


    After a day of physical and mental activity, rest is appreciated (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/9/2016 2:17:00 PM)


    Wonderful poem,
    So many duties remain for next
    Days remain and days dwell sure
    With spreading of light we see
    Nice style is adopted in mind.
    (Report) Reply

  • Aarzoo Mehek (1/9/2016 1:54:00 PM)


    Phew! nobody can escape from the grills of life, monotonous life freezes our minds and heart and we just become robots in the hands of time. Love the way the poem is ended on a positive note. Compliments. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 9, 2016



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