Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 146,089 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Take Your Bread With Love - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

My dear children! Eat your bread,
Drink the milk and listen dad instead.
Meet the hunger and quench the thirst,
Offer your food always God to first.

Don’t think evil when you eat,
Always speak truth and have feat.
Obey your mum and agree to eat,
What does she give is nectar you treat.

She is the embodiment of love and peace,
Respect her and honour her without cease.
Help her when does she need your help,
Dedicate yourself deeply like kelp.

Eat the bread when does she say,
Eat and drink in proper way.
Before eating you wash your hand,
Think to God, food, vanish bland.

Love your sister and your brother,
Be obedient to your respected father.
Share your bread among them,
Being active, bring family phlegm.

Topic(s) of this poem: childhood , food


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is a poem with advice to children. Sometimes children disagree to eat and drink. Here poet says, “Lovely children, wash your hands with soap before taking food. Offer your food to God first and then eat your food. Eat your bread and drink the milk. Don’t think evil at the time of eating. Obey your mum. She is the embodiment of peace and love. Treat the food nectar what does she give. Help her when she needs your help. Dedicate your life for the welfare of family and society. Love your brothers and sisters. Share your food among them. Be calm and make the family calm. This is the theme of the poem in nutshell. This is written in Deogsrh, Odisha, India and is dedicated to the people of the world.
Glossary
Feat-remarkable action
Cease-stop
Kelp-large brown seaweed
Bland-tasteless
Phlegm-calmness

Comments about Take Your Bread With Love by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/3/2016 5:43:00 AM)


    Don't think evil! Nice advice. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2015 11:08:00 PM)


    make love first
    and last
    with what you think is right
    and fight
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  • (4/12/2015 5:48:00 AM)


    a very valuable message to delivered to each n every child and grown up
    if you waste food you are denying another one their meal
    money might be yours but resource is someone else's
    a perfect advice
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  • Geetha Jayakumar (4/8/2015 12:54:00 PM)


    A Poem with a great message for children. Beautiful presentation. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/5/2015 10:49:00 AM)


    nice poem.....10

    love is only option
    to keep good relation
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  • Valsa George (4/4/2015 2:02:00 AM)


    A great message of sharing to children by a loving father! In a world steeped in poverty when many starve, showing disrespect to food is arrogance! So eat what you are served with taste and joy and also gratitude to God! (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (4/1/2015 10:47:00 AM)


    Great wisdom in this wonderful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (3/31/2015 6:38:00 PM)


    Every meal is a boon from God. Treat it with respect and eat it with joy. Beautiful message delivered. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (3/31/2015 4:26:00 AM)


    A beautiful message for the children............................... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 29, 2015



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