Tanka ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka ~

Rating: 5.0


dream gently unfolds
like a fresh spring from mountain
butterfly flutters
reality skirmishes
wondering when wind tickles

Sunday, September 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 06 September 2020

That is the secret that makes us enjoy it most. Wonderful.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 September 2020

A brilliant thanks with great philosophical implications....Top score!

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T Rajan Evol 07 September 2020

Wind will definitely tickle. Fantastic poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2020

Fresh spring unfolds the mountain and dreams unfold us amazingly. There is deep natural connection. This poem is very amazingly and brilliantly penned with much amazement..10

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Indira Renganathan 06 September 2020

A lovely tanka indeed...very amusing

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 September 2020

dream is a power In life of marching ahead pioneer life light Eucalyptus roots go deep To catch the colorful sky

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Aarzoo Mehek 06 September 2020

May the dreams unfold just like nature spreads the beauty all around. Nice thought Asim.10+++

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