leaves like dance gestures
charmingly green in colour,
Waving in rhythm,
fascinatingly designed,
timeless, meaningful mudras!
Ever so very very beautifully painted! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++
Magnificent! .. Ever such beauty and mesmerizing thoughts to hold endlessly through out time! ..
A beautiful depiction of the wonders of leaves. Liked the analogy put in the poem.. A well crafted Tanka, Dr. Geeta.
Nice try Geeta, ...BUT.....I believe you mean 'waving', not 'waiving': 'waive /wāv/ verb gerund or present participle: waiving refrain from insisting on or using (a right or claim) . 'he will waive all rights to the money' '
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love this Tanka Geeta Bravo Please read my recent poems and comment! ! ! ! !