Tanka 9 - Waving In Rhythm Poem by Geeta Radhakrishna Menon

Tanka 9 - Waving In Rhythm

Rating: 5.0

leaves like dance gestures

charmingly green in colour,

Waving in rhythm,

fascinatingly designed,

timeless, meaningful mudras!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 November 2024

Love this Tanka Geeta Bravo Please read my recent poems and comment! ! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 19 November 2024

This is beautifully written.... thanks for sharing....

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Rebecca Navarre 13 December 2024

Ever so very very beautifully painted! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 13 December 2024

Magnificent! .. Ever such beauty and mesmerizing thoughts to hold endlessly through out time! ..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 November 2024

A beautiful depiction of the wonders of leaves. Liked the analogy put in the poem.. A well crafted Tanka, Dr. Geeta.

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Bri Edwards 19 November 2024

Nice try Geeta, ...BUT.....I believe you mean 'waving', not 'waiving': 'waive /wāv/ verb gerund or present participle: waiving refrain from insisting on or using (a right or claim) . 'he will waive all rights to the money' '

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 November 2024

And Thanx

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