when you were brought to the sky
because youre more beautiful
its angels started to cry
and for taking your soul
began to feel sigh
why you took her
and left me to dry
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i tried to follow her
but my hands deny
come and take me
i wanna too die
for being alive without love
is nothing but a lie
tears are everywhere
here and in the sky
over spilled water
we all do cry
but why you took her
you knew you will feel sigh
if you take me
red no longer will be my eye
I can see a sad and touching story.(behind the scenes) May god bless you with someone that will heal the wound that had been carve upon you.
I loves this 1 the most but ur a good writer and enjoyed reading all ur work.
this is a very touching poem. I enjoyed it very much. Each line moved me and I love your style of writing. :)
oh dear...it's really touching......i dont have enough words to this wonderful poem.....great B)
OH! ! ..I'm trying my best not to cry... But this one is one of the best poems I've ever read for this day!
how dare you make me cry, , sniff, sniff.. lovely piece.. interesting..
Good poem. It was really sad...but I enjoyed it. You have really nice poems...keep it up once again - good job.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i will try..to not lie..and say hi.. to the new life with a die..........great emotions u have.