Tareq Jalabi

Tears Everywhere

when you were brought to the sky
because youre more beautiful
its angels started to cry
and for taking your soul
began to feel sigh
why you took her
and left me to dry
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i tried to follow her
but my hands deny
come and take me
i wanna too die
for being alive without love
is nothing but a lie
tears are everywhere
here and in the sky
over spilled water
we all do cry
but why you took her
you knew you will feel sigh
if you take me
red no longer will be my eye

Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 17, 2008
Poem Edited: Thursday, November 13, 2008

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  • sara }i{ (12/16/2008 9:51:00 AM)

    oh dear...it's really touching......i dont have enough words to this wonderful poem.....great B)

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  • Min Sia (11/27/2008 6:34:00 AM)

    OH! ! ..I'm trying my best not to cry...

    But this one is one of the best poems I've ever read for this day!

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  • Reina Lorenzo (11/22/2008 8:06:00 AM)

    how dare you make me cry, , sniff, sniff..

    lovely piece.. interesting..

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  • Gutter Box (11/20/2008 5:31:00 PM)

    Good poem. It was really sad...but I enjoyed it.
    You have really nice poems...keep it up
    once again - good job.

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  • Jessica Rolston (11/18/2008 8:06:00 PM)

    this was kind of interesting...

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  • Little Hatila ;) (10/9/2008 10:02:00 AM)

    wow...very sad and full of truth...the best part of it is 'for being alive without love
    is nothing but a lie'......keep going...it deserves more than ten

    Hataw

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  • Nathalie Petersson (8/21/2008 2:35:00 PM)

    Beautiful! ! I like that one!
    Keep writing, youre i great poetry(?)
    :)

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  • Sage of Time (8/11/2008 2:34:00 AM)

    wow that actually made me sad...your so awesome...keep on truckin! ! ! !

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  • Wadeema Ali (7/31/2008 6:06:00 AM)

    wow......very nice and sensetive poem......
    keep on gud work.....ok

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  • Shruti Modi (7/30/2008 2:20:00 PM)

    its very touching...
    i like ur style of writing...its got this unusual but very good sort of a rhyme scheme....! keep it up..
    m glad u shared it...its quite personal!

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  • Serenity Prayer (7/30/2008 1:23:00 PM)

    i loved reading it. great job. excellent.

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  • Katherine Lenninger (7/29/2008 10:46:00 AM)

    this is a very touching poem. I enjoyed it very much. Each line moved me and I love your style of writing. :)

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  • DELETED NOW (7/27/2008 10:51:00 AM)

    I loves this 1 the most but ur a good writer and enjoyed reading all ur work.

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  • Katherine Ng Li Hoon (7/27/2008 9:04:00 AM)

    I can see a sad and touching story.(behind the scenes)
    May god bless you with someone that will heal the wound that had been carve upon you.

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  • Mohammad Al-kurdi (7/20/2008 1:16:00 PM)

    i will try..to not lie..and say hi.. to the new life with a die..........great emotions u have.

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  • Francesca Lam (7/19/2008 9:28:00 AM)

    That's so sad...
    I'm sure you will find your love soon.

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  • Wanelisa Albert (7/17/2008 1:08:00 PM)

    These are the kind of words that make Literature legendary!
    its so personal and real, truly genuine!
    a blessing for all those who suffered a loss.
    Thank you

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  • Rema Prasanna (7/17/2008 10:25:00 AM)

    You opened up your heart for your sincere love...tears everywhere..
    heartfelt feelings expressed well..10

    Rema

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  • samar Halabi (7/17/2008 10:15:00 AM)

    very wonderful sadness. I feel that you`ve wrote it with truly feelings. really wonderful I enjoyed it... keep it up

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