About love i had no clue
when to yours my heart flew
but after that i knew
that love belongs to u
all poets your face drew
when writing love poems too
not knowing about you but few,
they didn`t do it as good as i do
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they imagined you with a beautiful face
a calm girl with alot of grace
while you are the thunder
and its lightning
you are the storm
while hard striking
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your eyes are the ocean
within i`m drowned
your lips are King Priam`s treasure
that i found
to kiss this ultimate pleasure
of flesh i would give up a pound
i know how you look
and of that i am proud
knowing we will stay together
i sleep sound
hey bluey, I like your comparisons ---calm girl---but thunder, storm lightning. I like this very much: 'your eyes are the ocean within i`m drowned your lips are King Priam`s treasure that i found to kiss this ultimate pleasure', and the finale-I sleep sound. Beautiful! ! ! ! ! keep writing and sharing with us.+++++++++++++++10000000 regards anjali
the muse of love poems...the muse of your heart and soon the muse of your soul...beautifully written, heartfelt. a 10
i love the flow and the depth of the meaning behimd, it is so full of emotions that are hidden, well written. i guess you are inspired by love, that is one thing that frees us all. thanks for sharing. voted
Wow! What a way you express....wonderfull...10 sathya narayana
The last line of this love poem is very sound as they say. The rhythm and rhymes are good all around. This poem demonstrates your fine ability. I congratulate you! A job well done. GW62
BLUE EYES, AS ANJALI SO APTLY WROTE, KEEP WRITING AND SHARING WITH US! YOU ARE A NATURAL AND WITH TIME YOU WILL TOP THE CHARTS, I'M SURE. YOU HAVE THE GIFT TO LOOK WITHIN YOURSELF, EXAMINE AND TRANSLANT YOUR ESSENCE INTO WORDS WHICH ARE FILLED WITH REALISM AND EMOTIONS. A JOY TO READ. THANK YOU. MY BEST, CAROL
What an amazing write about your girl! Very romantic and touch the soul of the person reading.
emotional strong feelings it had..when i read it i had.....it gives a non-lover feelings to fall in love within..and be in his woman's heart again.......keep working friend.
A veritable rap of a poem. Catchy rhythm, heartfelt words, seductive title - wonderful stuff! S :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
its a lovely poem..uve really descrbed ur lover well