Would you quit
rubbing love
to your heart?
Better
rub onion
to the eyes!
It has the same effect
of giving cries
Only, for shorter
period of times.
Ah i love this Elena, so profound and it's fit the meaning very well..great job! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! _Unwritten Soul
Ah you almost thumb your nose at the cupids bow... catch me if you can self sustaining and confident lines cheers
Elena, I love your analogy! Your words flow so easy, yet stick to my lips like honey. Great write! -Kelly.
heart burns brilliant being inflamed by love yet eyes looks red by tears losing love, .............................interesting write 10++.thanks for sharing
yes, must deserves it! ! ! ! Onion? ? ? ? Great like always! ! ! !
I enjoy this cutie poem especially the word... rub onion...so great! !
wonderful it reminds me one of Ozzy Osbourne's song named No More Tears. Mucho gracias meansm
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Agree with you here Elena, the one thing which shouldn't make you cry always does - good one.