Tears Of Love Poem by Elena Sandu

Tears Of Love



Would you quit
rubbing love
to your heart?
Better
rub onion
to the eyes!
It has the same effect
of giving cries
Only, for shorter
period of times.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 05 September 2012

Agree with you here Elena, the one thing which shouldn't make you cry always does - good one.

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Unwritten Soul 22 August 2012

Ah i love this Elena, so profound and it's fit the meaning very well..great job! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! _Unwritten Soul

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Rupika Alekhya 21 August 2012

Precise and effective

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Saadat Tahir 08 August 2012

Ah you almost thumb your nose at the cupids bow... catch me if you can self sustaining and confident lines cheers

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Kelly Seale 08 August 2012

Elena, I love your analogy! Your words flow so easy, yet stick to my lips like honey. Great write! -Kelly.

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JOY OGOR 30 May 2019

LOVE IT

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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 October 2012

heart burns brilliant being inflamed by love yet eyes looks red by tears losing love, .............................interesting write 10++.thanks for sharing

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Poetheart Morgan 23 September 2012

yes, must deserves it! ! ! ! Onion? ? ? ? Great like always! ! ! !

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Eindaray Kyaw 21 September 2012

I enjoy this cutie poem especially the word... rub onion...so great! !

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Nader Baheri 14 September 2012

wonderful it reminds me one of Ozzy Osbourne's song named No More Tears. Mucho gracias meansm

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