Teenager feelings changing my life
making me love the sky
Sweet feelings complete my days
Taking my breath away
Dancing alone...Calling the phone
With my lovely days while I am staring at the moon
Crazy times go by….
Careless and nonsense things
Smiling and dreaming of wonderful things
Great piece, teens from all over the world would agree with you here Syrian, it's the parents they love to disagree with......keep expressing your youthful wisdom best wishes Jon
lovely piece, it is absoultely an imitation of our inner feelings,
A real refreshing piece of art. I wish you will keep the warm red heart of teenager no matter what age you are-all the best. :)
You have captured the feelings of love for all ages. Love feels the same at any age. It is just that teenagers are fresh in their senses and emotions. Your emotions are fresh indeed. Wonderful! GW62
I really liked your poem. I have been writing for over 20yrs and this is better than alot of experienced writers write. Keep up the good work.: -)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I agree... love it! Thanks :) Athena xx