samar halabi

Teenager Feelings

Teenager feelings changing my life
making me love the sky
Sweet feelings complete my days
Taking my breath away
Dancing alone...Calling the phone
With my lovely days while I am staring at the moon
Crazy times go by….
Careless and nonsense things
Smiling and dreaming of wonderful things

Poem Submitted: Monday, July 14, 2008

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  • Delicate Heart (7/30/2009 1:10:00 PM)

    lovely piece, it is absoultely an imitation of our inner feelings,

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  • Arwen Lee CW (3/21/2009 1:17:00 PM)

    A real refreshing piece of art. I wish you will keep the warm red heart of teenager no matter what age you are-all the best. :)

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  • Ershad MazumderErshad Mazumder (2/22/2009 11:39:00 AM)

    Sweet and excellant poem.Right poem for the right time.

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  • Greenwolfe 1962 (1/18/2009 5:26:00 PM)

    You have captured the feelings of love for all ages. Love feels the same at any age. It is just that teenagers are fresh in their senses and emotions. Your
    emotions are fresh indeed. Wonderful!

    GW62

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  • Dianna Nally (9/6/2008 2:26:00 PM)

    I really liked your poem. I have been writing for over 20yrs and this is better than alot of experienced writers write. Keep up the good work.: -)

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  • Emily OldhamEmily Oldham (9/6/2008 1:34:00 PM)

    I agree... love it! Thanks :)
    Athena xx

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (7/23/2008 9:16:00 AM)

    Great piece, teens from all over the world would agree with you here Syrian, it's the parents they love to disagree with......keep expressing your youthful wisdom

    best wishes
    Jon

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  • Blue Eyes (7/17/2008 9:58:00 AM)

    i loved it.it talks about the feelings of all teens.

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