Thanksgiving Poem by Freespirit Juneja

Thanksgiving

Rating: 4.4


O My friend
I just had my supper
Wondering why I'm telling you

It was cooked by you
Lines of surprise
Oh they are coming
Your curiosity, swiftly running
Still wondering
Listen to me
And stop pondering
The supper was yummy
As if made by my mummy
Restlessness,
Ah I see it coming
Oh Your curiosity
How honest & uncunning
Stopping the tease
Making you at ease
I unveil the truth
The Supper you sent me
Of your beautiful world
of which you made me a pearl
Mesmerize my all sensations
Fills me with joy n celebrations
Oh I forgot to mention
That you're really amazing
In your absence
Even snow starts freezing
Sitting so far
I have nothing to offer you
Thanksgiving is all
which I can give you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brianna Winebarger 24 April 2012

love it...to me it seems intense love

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Rekha Mandagere 23 April 2012

Love is sweeter, sweet sentiments are smiling here. We must thank Almighty go for giving us great things in our lives. Nice poem :)

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Aditi Khandelwal 22 April 2012

Sitting so far I have nothing to offer u Thanksgiving is all which I can give u Really nice poem... Aditi

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Khushi Throne 21 April 2012

i am say to....Thanksgiving'' bcaz i invited to read own poem.it is very nice words......

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Claudia Krizay 21 April 2012

I enjoyed reading this- great job

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Sherif Monem 08 July 2012

easy reading and nice.

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Dead Leaf 09 June 2012

Nice poem.... -sanu

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Rajendran Muthiah 07 June 2012

Beautifully written free verse poem.

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Samra Haq 02 June 2012

Very nice poem beautiful poem. I like the title of your poem by the name of Thanks giving. Especially I like the ending of your poem the you have ended it. Superb

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Vangile Mtyali 02 June 2012

pla write I had supper not a supper n also say, it was cooked by you

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