O My friend
I just had my supper
Wondering why I'm telling you
It was cooked by you
Lines of surprise
Oh they are coming
Your curiosity, swiftly running
Still wondering
Listen to me
And stop pondering
The supper was yummy
As if made by my mummy
Restlessness,
Ah I see it coming
Oh Your curiosity
How honest & uncunning
Stopping the tease
Making you at ease
I unveil the truth
The Supper you sent me
Of your beautiful world
of which you made me a pearl
Mesmerize my all sensations
Fills me with joy n celebrations
Oh I forgot to mention
That you're really amazing
In your absence
Even snow starts freezing
Sitting so far
I have nothing to offer you
Thanksgiving is all
which I can give you
I like the idea! but, the story seems to be all over the place.
Still have this memory, but back here to remember thou thanksgiving! enjoy the day_Unwritten Soul
The end was made with the sugar coated lines...Curiosity is that exist? ..In a friendship we need no return but enough to see laughing and smiling friend again and again. It's good to see snow is freezing because if it's not freezing then it must melted already hahaha..Joking! I am gonna write my own lines again Your words feed me with prayers No more reason for me to keep hunger O friend thou make the miles become shorter Warrior of my days to embrace life warmer Supper is ready for you to eat Have them as it made from the deep Deep in my heart and deeper inside For thou my friend for keep me bright With your prayers I know u feed me the right Thanks giving us your fondness side _Unwritten Soul
verry good right. i actually really like it. its a nice way to put it all.
Very nice poem beautiful poem. I like the title of your poem by the name of Thanks giving. Especially I like the ending of your poem the you have ended it. Superb
pla write I had supper not a supper n also say, it was cooked by you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
love it...to me it seems intense love