That Open Gate Poem by Ernestine Northover

That Open Gate

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The path led through an open gate
New fresh pastures there to find.
Just a few steps were needed now,
To leave the sad past behind.

An unknown future awaited,
My intrepid heart's desire.
To face a bright new tomorrow,
And set my old world on fire.

A short distance was remaining,
For me and the unexplored,
I crossed over to the unseen,
That the other side had stored.

But the track turned rough and stoney,
And not my so hoped for aim,
So thus back through that open gate,
I returned from whence I came.

© Ernestine Northover

Thursday, August 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Maybe it is not greener on the other side of the hill.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sachidananda Panda 27 June 2019

An unknown future awaited, My intrepid heart's desire. To face a bright new tomorrow, And set my old world on fire." Beautifu..! Dear poet.. liked it most.. Thanks.

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 June 2019

Write comment. Such a beautiful image, Ernestine. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Chuck Audette 22 October 2017

And sometimes we have no way to return to our original pasture, alas.

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Paul Butters 04 August 2016

We find the same thing when we cross The Pennines from Yorkshire into Lancashire, Ernestine. ha ha

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