That Shiny City In The Future Poem by Obed dela Cruz

That Shiny City In The Future

Rating: 4.8


Imagine a city,
Filled of gems and luxury.
Death does not exist.
Sickness, again won’t moist.
From heaven it will come.
This truth is not a sham.
All pains and troubles
Shall be expiring as fast as bubbles.
They that dwell there
Are immortal forever!
Everyone shall be able.
All is available.
The streets are made of gold,
Because with care, it has been molded.
Everywhere are life zones.
You’ll never see bloody bones!
It has more aesthetic beauty.
Because there lives love and tranquility.
All can endure,
Because the Supreme One has the rule.
All power and glory,
Belongs to God Almighty!
This city is made for the saints.
So live your life with holiness.
Obey God’s commandments.
Sin less and love God more.
Life and salvation, God is the author.
That shiny city in the future
Is very imaginative.
All you see, you can lure.
Also, all are positive.
From everlasting
To everlasting
Life will never die
And death is ever dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christina Phan 27 August 2009

Fanastic poem very put and thought kept it up

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Joseph Poewhit 20 August 2009

Heaven is a reality--

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 20 August 2009

Wow, I've read all of yours, and I think this is the best! !

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Rajaram Ramachandran 20 August 2009

You have created a dream world, another heaven of your own.

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Mubeen Sadhika 20 August 2009

Nice. Well thought. Beautiful.

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