That Special Glow Poem by Practicing Poetess

That Special Glow

Rating: 5.0


When people look at him and me,
They think we are a pair
But things are not as they appear,
And life is so unfair.
I'm in the presence of someone
For whom I do not care.
When all I want is time with you,
Your company to share.

I'd much prefer to dream of you
Than spending time with him.
You have my very heart, it's true
While he is just a friend.
I don't know what else I can do
To make you see the light
I'm sad and lonely, and I'm blue
All day, and every night.

I'm only passing time with him
I think you ought to know
That you're the man who causes me
To feel that special glow
And I won't let him hold my hand
Or hug or kiss me, so
I need us like we were before,
So I can let him go.

At best, he's a poor substitute
That's all he'll ever be.
We need the hugs we used to share,
The joy of you and me.

Wednesday, February 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poem written 19th February 2019
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Rams 22 February 2019

a very well written poem and an eye opener

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Practicing Poetess 23 February 2019

Thank you, Louis. 'Well written', coming from you, is a high compliment! : -)

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Kostas Lagos 22 February 2019

Complicated personal relationships! The human drama presented perfectly!

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Practicing Poetess 22 February 2019

LOL Kostas, you nailed it! An oldie classic rock song by Crosby, Stills & Nash had the words 'And if you can't be with the one you love, Love the one you're with.' But it isn't always that easy. (A YouTube commenter wrote: 'Quite possibly the worst advice ever given in a song! ') Thank you for your on-point comment!

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Carl Roussell 21 February 2019

Nothing and no one can replace real love, a good write and a 10

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Practicing Poetess 21 February 2019

Thanks, Carl. Only those who have truly loved, recognise this. You simply cannot make yourself love someone that you do not love!

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Prabir Gayen 20 February 2019

While he is just a friend. I don't know what else I can do To make you see the light I'm sad and lonely, and I'm blue All day, and every night....10+++++++++++++++++++++

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Practicing Poetess 21 February 2019

Thanks so much for rating, Prabir! Much appreciated! : -)

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Prabir Gayen 20 February 2019

Concluding part is more beautiful..... At best, he's a poor substitute That's all he'll ever be. We need the hugs we used to share, The joy of you and me.....thanks dear poetess ❤

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Practicing Poetess 21 February 2019

Prabir, thank you for your appreciation, and for the little heart!

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