The Affair - Poem by Alison Cassidy

awesome affair...........needs awesome writing....................... (Report)Reply

A love-cake and I see all the ingredients are there. (Report)Reply

Amazing detail in so few words... great write, Alison!
Brian (Report)Reply

Allie - this is a very profound poem. One which is close to my heart right now, I am experiencing all of this from both sides of the coin. Thank you for such a lovely poem. xx: -) (Report)Reply

Wow Alison...never heard the whole incident broken down so well...powerful word use in this one for sure. I especially like 'fearful imaginings.' Provokes instant stress into the reader. Well done! (Report)Reply

Allie...You said it all...Stem to Stern...Straight Shootin', insightful Write...and i like it very much...Solid Penning, my dear! '''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr (Report)Reply

well, i see and hear and read you!

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When the penitent and the aggrieved come together in forgiveness and renewal, there is love. (Report)Reply

...on second thought, it isn't just life's tapestry, it's life's D N A, and we only get one crack at that... (Report)Reply

Short on words - long on meaning. You said it all, in spades. Been there, done that, with the exception of the last line - just didn't happen.
Linda (Report)Reply

Agreed with Declan (finally he has this in writing) . A journey through the emotions ending in the ideal - yes, can relate to each and every one, indeed. t x (Report)Reply

I can buy that. Sometimes you just have to work at these things. Well constructed Alison. (Report)Reply