The Aphrodite Poem by Freespirit Juneja

The Aphrodite

Rating: 4.9


Embraced in Seraph's wings
I had my last sight
New world to a new world
I was flying like a kite
From nowhere her warmth came
Snapped my beautiful flight
Fearing I might loose him
I held him(Seraph) so tight
Soon he could not bear it
Left me alone to fight
Then I got my own wings
To guard me from her sight
Warmth started embracing me
I couldn't find respite
Soon she started kissing me
Restless was my plight
I twisted, I turned
but her presence was too bright
Defeated me, finally opened my eyes
Flickered a bit in that vivid light
Mesmerized & startled to see
I was held by The Aphrodite


The Aphrodite

The new life of every day
First melody of every soul
Adorned with music of Avians
Smiling with blossomed flowers
Freshness of new feelings
With the blanket of Love
The Aphrodite is no one, but
The beautiful rays of Sun(morning)

(Here they're coming from the windows of my room)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It starts with sleeping at night and getting up in the morning.It's a quest between one's desire to sleep but the sunshine coming from the window won't let him / her sleep..

Seraph..... a member of the highest order of angels, often represented as a child's head with wings above, below, and on each
side
Ist 2 lines state that I was about to go to sleep

Then In the next 2 I was dreaming

Then the sunlight comes, the first few rays touch me, the dream phase got over and subsequently the fight to sleep starts

The Aphrodite...I opened my eyes n see from the window the beautiful morning sunlight... The music of birds.... The smell of flowers....renewed me..... the feeling of love.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 11 June 2012

when we are defeated by ecstatic love, we are born anew!

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Hana Elabe 11 June 2012

Nice poem it really got my attention keep it up =}

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Ramesh Rai 11 June 2012

The new life of every day First melody of every soul

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Indira Babbellapati 11 June 2012

poetic...........................! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 11 June 2012

you brought out a divine explanatory thing b/w soporfic state and laziness to still lay on bed. opening lines of sunlight....a true wise twist! !

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Carl Roussell 09 October 2022

An interesting take on sunlight, Well-deserved Poem of the Day

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Babatunde Aremu 19 November 2012

Appreciating nature in a unique style. Great write

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Captain Cur 06 July 2012

You had me soaring with this poem. Sunlight, Aphrodite. I'd take the girl anytime. Great poem.

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Oladehinde J Ibikunle 23 June 2012

Excellent poem, nice one, my dear poet!

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Tarundeep Kaur 12 June 2012

Nice piece of work...It gives a feeling of divinity...something pure..interpreted in many wayzzz...like motherly touch/ or d one u luv d most..gives u a secured feeling...Keep going sharad :) :) Regards Tarun :)

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