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C.P this is not only the beginning it is also the middle and the end. What a great shame mankind cannot keep it simple. I think you are right man is blinded by his own ego, ----10

in every beginning, everything will rise...naizz

Absolutely beautiful poem with a message of calmness. Very nice. Jim

What a wonderful poem - An ecstatic celebration of life!

I believe that one should celebrate life. Each new day is a gift and well worth living. Praise for your eloquent pen. Warm regards, Sandra

Good for the start of a new week really :)

A very philosophic and exalted at the same time ode to life. You obviously love life passionately. It is somehow infectable, so optimistic :)

Very thought provoking! what a lovely view you have of life! regards Bob

The manifestation of life on Earth.............things that we can't compromise.Good job Sharma.

a strong appeal and an eyeopener to mankind 10+

GENESIS.....the beginning of everything...great piece....BRILLIANT ONE makes us think over and over that we are just created by the Divine one...everything......... and we are just STEWARDS on all of these....not its ABSOLUTE MASTERS.. given dominions over everything but not to ruin but to nurture.... as I can cultivate a garden, together we can nurture paradise.... 10++++++++++++++++++++++

In the begining there was a light, in between there is plight And in end there would be delight................ Good Poem............. A golden egg........

wonderful..a great genesis of verses...

A great poem that carries an important message for us all. Best wishes, Andrew

simplicity in expression, deep in meaning and wisdom. books can't teach, what nature reveals, if you are tuned to it and your intuition. impressive.10 Mamta

Your creation story is magical and written with just the right blend of wisdom and mirth. Your moral is powerful and environmentally and spiritually persuasive. There is light and love and enchantment in your words. Beautiful Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Though everyone is aware of these rules, rarely anyone is following them. Only poets like your goodself are trying to highlight them through this forum such essential needs of the hour. Thanks for sharing this good poem with me.

The songs of psalms...beautiful poem about nature and creation, great imagery used, with a touch of environmental awareness plea...10+++