My brother is writing a poem;
He's been writing it for years.
It'll be the best one ever,
Of that I have no fears.
If it were a mountain,
His poem would be Everest.
That's one way of saying
It surely is the best.
If it were an ocean,
Pacific it would be,
Because his words are deeper
Than waters of any sea.
His fame will spread both near and far,
And last beyond his death,
But until he finishes the poem,
I will not hold my breath!
You have aroused the reader's curiosity to the hilt. We don't know about how the poem of your brother turns out to be. What we know is that you have shared with us a truly amazing poem. Thanks, Kim.
Incredible picture and what a beautiful poem. You do have a wonderful relationship with your brother. Thank You
Wow a lovely super encouragement for your brothers fine poetry. I enjoyed the mention of everest n Pacific. Kudos. Nice to read u again. I hope u read my latest too on Tanzania.
ur brother is excellent he confides in you hoping you will hold on for longgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
the best review of a poem (though non-existing yet) ever written. Liked it! ! !
O.K., I just found out the name of the spring in the picture. It's Grand Prismatic Spring. It’s the third-largest hot spring in the world and the largest in America.
This well written and wonderfully descriptive poem reminds me of the word procrastination. He's going to get it done, but it sounds like it will never really be done. Great plans are not worth much if they stay plans instead of action. I hope he finishes the poem so you do get to read it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a 100's not old for you, Kim. Resume buying green. Have a look at Banjo Paterson's 'The Pearl Diver'