The Bottomless Dream Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

The Bottomless Dream

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The bottomless dream continues as I lay
It hounds in the shadows
Like the night I found you with her
Lurking, as though, I was a vampire
I watch you and her make love
And the feeling of pure loathing
Has spread throughout my body
As you continue to diss me in front of friends
In this bottomless dream, I have hit rock bottom
But now, I have gone lower than this
As my heart has turned cold

Friday, December 16, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: breaking up
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 17 December 2022

Very profound and deep LeeAnn.

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Richard Wlodarski 17 December 2022

Bad enough that he cheated on you...and then, he disses you in front of friends. No one deserves to be treated like that. Time to move on. You deserve a whole lot better, LeeAnn! You will continue to have those dreams until you resolve this; that's their purpose.

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M. Asim Nehal 18 December 2022

I feel for you and even in your dreams - he is haunting now. I hope it is just your dream not reality. *****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 December 2022

Deeply poignant and touching. A vivid depiction of an unfaithful love.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 December 2022

When our hearts are broken and we are deeply hurt, sometimes these events in our lives are reflected in our dreams.

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Anjandev Roy 17 December 2022

Significant piece........thank u...

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Anjandev Roy 17 December 2022

........I have gone lower than this

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