The Buddha Smile Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

The Buddha Smile

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Come O sorrows, thou art a waking call,
As happiness heals me like sleeping pills,
Upon a hard day's work how respite feels—
Let doors to joy open where there was wall.
In dark clouds a silver line all so bright
Seems pleasure on the crest of deep-set pain—
A Buddha smile with space for pain and plight,
A middle path welcoming sun and rain!
Imagine life deserted by grey grief,
Nary a scope of a cool breeze of joy,
If easy goes the road to far off cliff,
Journey's thrill plateaus like joys of new toy.
There's unknown thrill in getting way lost,
And reaching still the right place if at cost!
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Sonnets | 15.10.15 |

Friday, May 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: journey,path,smile,travel
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Buddha's smile seems tinged with pain, as is Mona Lisa's so enigmatic. Life's duals are to be welcomed with the same face, as this sonnet seems to say.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 11 May 2019

A Buddha smile with space for pain and plight...................While delving deep into the line, I recollect, 'Desire is the cause of all sorrows'....Therefore, the great lord Budhha always smiled.....A great work sir...10

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Mahtab Bangalee 19 May 2019

thoroughly pluck the right place of life and meaningful note of this poem

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 May 2019

Thank you Mahtab Bangalee. Sometimes your comments are more enigmatic than Mona Lisa's smile. But I will follow Buddha and take the middling message.

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A Buddha smile with space for pain and plight, A middle path welcoming sun and rain! A lovely poem on the middle path of Buddha

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 May 2019

Thank you so much for the feedback. Sometimes I wonder how most religions say more or less the same thing in different words. Bhagavad Gita tells us to equal in times good or bad, transcend life's opposing duals. This is nothing but Buddha's middle path. And still wars are fought for religions.

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Kostas Lagos 16 May 2019

Caught the essence of Buddha 's smile! Splendid!

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 May 2019

Thanks for visiting the poem and 'splendid' comments.

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Indira Renganathan 16 May 2019

If there is no change with a challenge in life then there will be no thrill in life at all..this sonnet clearly and beautifully sings that...last two lines are superb 10+++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 May 2019

Thank you dear poet, I fully agree with you as does my sonnet.

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 May 2019

Thank you dear poet readers, I will visit this space again to respond to your comments. I do not see any feedback right now.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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