allan macli borges

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The City Of Sunset And Sunrise Part I - Poem by allan macli borges

The City of Sunset

The last sun ray touches the earth and go
Breathings of light turn the sky into
An amalgam of all sorted wavelengths
From red to violet all dissolved colors
As dissolved is the happiness of the day
The coldest night falling overwhelming
All around there’s no light to break it
Darkness frightens our body and spirit
Useless eyes dropp tears on their weeping
The city of sunset has at last taken its place

Comments about The City Of Sunset And Sunrise Part I by allan macli borges

  • (3/23/2009 4:29:00 AM)

    love it..
    you have a nice piece penned as well..
    what do you mean i should not despite? ?
    i cant understand..
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  • (3/22/2009 11:19:00 PM)

    Brilliant use of words. Definately paints a picture in one's mind. (Report) Reply

  • Sathyanarayana M V S (3/22/2009 2:06:00 AM)

    A deep imagery; good flow of words. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • (3/22/2009 12:38:00 AM)

    Distress flows in this piece, a bit vague on you that reflected your creation. Pity for whatever it is....Thanks (Report) Reply

  • (3/22/2009 12:14:00 AM)

    What? are you in college?
    Got to be, man.
    How do you keep coming up with these masterpieces?
    Keep up the good work, you're gonna be somebody.
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  • (3/21/2009 10:32:00 PM)

    .....the thought presenting the environ is one of anguish and not of bright colors...but have convey the thoughts clearly...gud one! ..winnie (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 21, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 21, 2009

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