From the clouds she came into a smoke
Reminiscence of the gold age
When the gods fallen on their sleepiness
Having no man to starts their race
Her skin shines as the moon - immaculate
Fearless to go into my gloominess
She took my soul out and flew away
A phenomenon like nothing else
Be touched by her skin so soft
And as I have made my choice
The gates shouted behind
‘There’s no way back’ said to me the voice
Fingernails on my neck
Whispers into the ears
A challenge for all my fears
My heart bleeding inside of me
Trespassed by million spears
Her passion so strong scratches my skin
All comes down trembling before her will
When she embraced me she took my being
The ground runs away from below
We stay suspended in our glow
This was so long ago
In an age that only we know
From the roots of the past
The feeling that will forever last
Stars shall die earth will pass away
And her beauty will always stay
To my Dama. (Cause our love seems to be since the time began and as strong it is, it will never expire)
From the roots of the past The feeling that will forever last Stars shall die earth will pass away And her beauty will always stay -------- Beautiful lines indeed...a poem crafted so lovingly. Great imagery and fine rhymes were visible in this composition... To your Dama, the love of your life...everything will fade and pass away but her beauty and love will last through eternity.............10+++
Honesty and frankness are the best elements for love and you got that elements Allan.Good love poem.
This is indeed a gloomy portrait. But it is so filled with the passion of a great love it has a way of making it seem even more powerful and sustainable than the normal love blossoming in the light of day. I guess that was the intent. If so, it has succeeded. GW62
What a beautiful poem, Allan! The flow and glow of its beauty is endless like the endless night. When there was nothing, there was night and there was love....10/10. Best Wishes. Naseer
And as I have made my choice The gates shouted behind ‘There’s no way back’ said to me the voice Rachel Ann Butler
'Stars shall die earth will pass away And her beauty will always stay' Excellent write 10+++
When one has experienced a love so deep, so passionate, that it verges on pain, then one can relate to the depth of brilliant poetry such as this. I was very very moved. Thank you Allan 10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very Very Very Beautiful.. I'm impressed by it's words. Lovely. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem. best wishes, ana