The City Of Sunset And Sunrise Part Ii Poem by allan macli borges

The City Of Sunset And Sunrise Part Ii

Rating: 4.5

The City of Sunrise

But even in the dark we can remember
Although I can not see your mouth right now
I still keep your sparkling smile so tender
In my mind you’re the brightest of the stars
In my hand the touching of your skin so white
We are able to break away with this night
Together we stand to clear up the world around
Out of darkness we will bring the sun back
What is a couple soon will turn into a crowd
Will not be easy but we must to follow this path
In the name of our children we’ll not long for rest.

Greenwolfe 1962 21 March 2009

I love the pleasant pace of this writing. It makes it easy for the reader to follow along. The contents are soothing to the mind and I am certain you will succeed. GW62

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 11 April 2009

well written

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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 March 2009

Again a wonderful imagery. Saying that you can find out her glowing face even in pitch darkness is a very good imagery......very well done........

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Catrina Heart 22 March 2009

Now this makes sense, from the unclear thoughts you came up with a bright vivid poem with hope, a beautiful promise of tomorrow.......Well the reading must have the 2 parts, must not displaced the one....10

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Chad Robinson 22 March 2009

You're the mann! ! ! ! Bravo, Bravo, Bravo! ! ! ! ! ! ! MORE! ! ! ! !

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Winnie Angel 21 March 2009

light happens to emerge out of the darkness with much promise for tomorrow.......loved to read....thanks for sharing! ..

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