The Cosmic Being Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

The Cosmic Being

Rating: 5.0


Nothing is immortal on this earth
Saved the marks you leave behind
In the last journey you perform
Quite untimely and unwarrantedly
The earth is not merely a mass of soil
It's a cosmic being patient and tolerant
Every thought, word and deed
Is monitored here to assess immortality

Friday, November 27, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: earth,immortality,journey,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Human activities are in cosmic surveillance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 27 November 2020

A profound, philosophical poem. To my list

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 November 2020

Nothing is permanent on earth! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thank you very much dear Edward Kofi Louis

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 November 2020

Nothing is immortal ~ that's true Again Nothing is mortal! ~ it's to me Disappearance is the existence of the mysterious existent present! Disappeared the name of mortality!

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Suresh Kumar Ek 28 November 2020

Patient and tolerant earth Monitiring and assessing Thought, word, and deed Great ideas

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Thanks a lot Suresh Kumar, the cosmic assessment is being done without the knowledge of the assessed

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Aarzoo Mehek 28 November 2020

The best poem of today I have read. Yes we are in cosmic surveillance. Nice poem.5****

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Thank you very much dear Aarzoo Mehek. Many do not think about the cosmic survelliance

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 November 2020

Such an excellent little poem! Pragmatic and quite perceptive...5 stars

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Thank you Dr. Dillip for the kind reading and profound evaluation

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