Rose Marie Juan Austin

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The Eyes Betray - Poem by Rose Marie Juan Austin

My lips denied him
My arms could never hold him
My eyes betrayed me.


Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan - Austin, All Rights Reserved

Topic(s) of this poem: love


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  • Mahtab Bangalee (6/18/2019 4:51:00 AM)

    eyes
    brings sometimes
    disputable situations
    of love
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  • Dash Of Poetry (6/15/2019 3:49:00 PM)

    Words artfully arranged, to capture three chapters in three lines. Beautiful poetry. (Report)Reply

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  • Chito Faustino (6/15/2019 9:28:00 AM)

    Three lines that portray a whole love affair... but in the Philippines, the title may be called " Pakipot" ...
    Well done Rose Marie! 10+
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  • Nosheen Irfan (6/14/2019 1:27:00 AM)

    Love is often bitter. How beautifully you have summed it up in just three lines. Kudos! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/13/2019 4:40:00 PM)

    Succinct and powerful.
    An entire story in three lines.
    Nicely done, Rose!
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  • Kostas Lagos (6/13/2019 12:01:00 PM)

    Three lines were enough to unfold your talent Rose Marie (Report)Reply

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  • Aniruddha Pathak (6/13/2019 6:15:00 AM)

    A small poem poem sets you thinking.
    Here eyes betrayed, but even the kiss could have,
    even the embrace might have.
    Lovely.
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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (6/12/2019 6:24:00 PM)

    The eyes are the most powerful tool of expression -
    the barometer of emotion......An excellent pretty poem, dear Ate Rose.......10+++++++++++
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  • Jane Campion (6/12/2019 2:54:00 PM)

    Love is blind and is not defined. A short poem that has many layers. (Report)Reply

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  • Don Kubicki (6/12/2019 2:25:00 PM)

    Salamat para sa pagbabahagi ng iyong kaisipan. (Report)Reply

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  • Prabir Gayen (6/12/2019 1:35:00 PM)

    My lips denied him
    My arms could never hold him
    My eyes betrayed me.
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/12/2019 1:34:00 PM)

    Facing the truth! !

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 12, 2019



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