The First Time Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

The First Time

Rating: 5.0


Don't tell me that you love me
Because it's illusion
You don't act as though
Don't tell me that you care
You never did
Don't waste the words
I want action
Write it down in yr blood
So, I can know it's real
And I will believe you for
The first time

Sunday, June 25, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 25 June 2023

Perfect and impeccable work.....thanks a lot....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 July 2023

Yes, one needs to exhibit and express his/her love through actions failure to it is betrayal. A wonderful poem

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Rajan T Renganathan 26 June 2023

Betrayal is painful.

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Sheeya Hacks 26 June 2023

Excellent poem, some are like what you said but not all.5****

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Believe in action rather than words, promises.. good one.

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Sandra Feldman 26 June 2023

Strong and forceful. Reaches heights of truth and spectacular sincerity. Direct and unforgettable 5+

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