The Genesis Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Opened its path! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

But of the fruit of the tree which is in the midst of the garden, God hath said, Ye shall not eat of it, neither shall ye touch it, lest ye die..........................IF EVE and ADAM had not eaten from this forbidden fruit, then our world would be one greatest peace, we have no sins at all, no wars, only the love and peace amongst us and our daily talkings to GOD. No sufferings on Golgotha. NONE, only PEACE and LOVE. Amazing poem you have presented

DEAR MAHTAB, about this beautiful thought provoking brevity of you, it IS MOST BEAUTIFUL, then it illustrates THE GENESIS from The Holy Scriptures, in a concised way, your brilliant way and that makes the concised poem more interesting. Really. According to GENESIS in The Bible....But of the fruit of the tree which is in the midst of the garden, God hath said, Ye shall not eat of it, neither shall ye touch it, lest ye die........SO IT BE. A 10

The social issues in your poems are for me understandable. You have to add the Poet's Notes here. Thank you so much. As you see, I am honest and never try to give a poem another meaning than is meant. A best thought provoking brevity this time. Whatever, I like to read your brevity either. A 10 for the Vote. Thank you for sharing.

A very THOUGHT provoking poem, but a good one, and I am still considering: I cite your poem here: The Genesis in secret treasure Banned fruits enjoyed the knowledge and opened its paths...........Well this is heaviest thinking for me, since I have more meanings to fill in what the poet does really mean. Too much a brevity to read what the poet truly means. I must admit this is a brilliant brevity. IF I may ask: a riddle of a poem?