It deepens oneself into silence
Suggesting us the pains of life
Here's the thing that could bring
A full blast to the other's mind.
This is brief & to the point. Thought provoking and it causes the reader to picture it all in action with the use of only four lines. I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.
It's a very powerful poem. Just four lines, yet full and flamboyant. A good bye kiss may be short or lingering, depending on the circumstances, but its effects are always soothing and lingering. Thanks for this beautiful poem.
The Good Bye Kiss is a short but very full filling and promising.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
short, simple and honest... love the poem sister.