The Good Bye Kiss Poem by Elena Sandu

The Good Bye Kiss

Rating: 4.8


It deepens oneself into silence
Suggesting us the pains of life
Here's the thing that could bring
A full blast to the other's mind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siyabonga A Nxumalo 31 May 2013

short, simple and honest... love the poem sister.

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Danny Draper 17 June 2013

Succinct and refreshingly evocative.

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R.benjamin Abate 07 June 2013

This is brief & to the point. Thought provoking and it causes the reader to picture it all in action with the use of only four lines. I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.

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Khairul Ahsan 09 October 2013

It's a very powerful poem. Just four lines, yet full and flamboyant. A good bye kiss may be short or lingering, depending on the circumstances, but its effects are always soothing and lingering. Thanks for this beautiful poem.

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Heather Wilkins 17 July 2013

a good bye kiss is a lingering kiss to remember. good write.

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Alvin Willis 01 July 2013

The Good Bye Kiss is a short but very full filling and promising.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 June 2013

Kelvin has rightly commented and agreed

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Kelvin Owusu 22 June 2013

short and sweet a nice poem

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