The Human Fail? ... Poem by Elena Sandu

The Human Fail? ...

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I believe that we all humans
are meant to share our love
with everybody and everything.
The love for own family,
friends, territory,
is done naturally
by all species on Earth,
nothing special for a being
to have such a great pride.
When we will be able
to hold unconditionally
the entire world
in one heart than we can say:
'- Here I am!
To be Human,
I'm very proud! '

(Looking forward to that day,
for now I still have plenty
to be ashamed of being what I am...)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A few thoughts asked to be put on paper inspired by few lines of our poet Khairul Ahsan:
'A poet's heart cannot be possessed
By a single soul mate entwined or not,
For a poet's heart is free to wander'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 09 October 2013

Thanks, Elena, for this wonderful message of universal love. 'When we will be able to hold unconditionally the entire world in one heart than we can say: '- Here I am! To be Human, I'm very proud! ' Your vision transcends all boundaries, imaginary as well as real, just like that of a true poet. Only poets can 'hold unconditionally the entire world in one heart'. My heartfelt thanks for the honor you have given me by mentioning me in your note.

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Danny Draper 10 October 2013

Universal love a great theme and good thoughts in this poem, well said.

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Heather Wilkins 12 October 2013

we need to hold all the world in our hearts with love. good ink

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Louis Cecile 13 October 2013

It is like answering the title's question in one honest poetic sentence.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 October 2013

Wow a thoughtprovoking humanitarian poem! Great job pal!

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Om Chawla 24 October 2013

Unconditional love for entire humanity is truly an admirable yearning but unfortunately it seems unattainable else the world would not have been what it is despite the teachings of lord Buddha, Jain Mahavira, Christ And many other great preachers. Yet we all yearn for that genuinely. It is a matter of shame for entire humanity which professes to be civilized.

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Amitava Sur 18 October 2013

very well written about universal love. Until we reach there, we can never be happy. You can read my ONE WORLD WITH ONE RACE.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 13 October 2013

A very good suggestive poem

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Louis Cecile 13 October 2013

It is like answering the title's question in one honest poetic sentence.

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