As we all kill
and destroy everything
around us
The holy man follows
the righteous path
With the ashes
and the souls
The loves and the lives
of the people
on a new path
Let him show
us all the way
wow! great poem about a life walkman by us... good writing, i love it
Wow! ! its wonderful! ! I call you sir as you are elder than me in both age and experience! A nice read.Thanks for appreciating my poem.
let us a follow this holy man, for he will take us to the promised land.
just wonderful......... nothing less than a fantastic blessing are you on this earth
What amazing is the amount you can say in such few words, its an eloquent piece, that as an agnostic I admire. Bravo
Let him show us all the way /// i love your noble feelings.. beautiful write...10
nice words alan... i liked it i would like to invite you to read my poem the friendship tree.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow! Terseness is all. Given the kill-frenzy all around us, from individual lives to global politics, the pacifism of the Holy Man comes as a way out. The poem is a call for getting under the shadow of the Red Rock, as T. S. Eliot said. In order to stop this Dionysian dance of death, we've to go back to the comforting fold of religion. Only the Holy Man has the art to appease anger and preach love for all. Dave has masterfully presented the idea in a few lines. A great poem is the one that kicks off the thought process. This poem has done that. Kudos for Dave! Great poet to read.