Some people get what they deserve
Some people deserve what they get
The Jinx between these statements
I haven't spotted yet
Which one of these, positive?
Which one, negative?
The word- what- is the witch
That decides what is which!
5th Feb 2020
Wonderful thoughts to ponder about. A brilliant play with words. A great exercise for the mind.
Muse of the riddle! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
You should have posted this poem without the 'note'...it would have been much more interesting I guess...as I have commented on you as a poet you are a magical poet....thanks a lot Kesav for all your comments on my poems and me as a poetess
A note often helps to start with. A warm soup. For taste and better digestion. Thanks Indira for your nice words. Welcome. And immense thanks for your good words on my PP also
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I think first line of this poem is negative, its tone clears that the bad luck you faced is due to your karma. The second line is positive, its tone says if so rapidly became popular, your poems deserved this honor.
Interesting feedback Akhtar. Good or bad Karma moves along, never ceases to recreate