Omar Ali Sabar
Bellshill, Scotland
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The Killer Gaze

Rating: 3.9
That glaring gaze that turns
the grey to black, water to muck
drops my tray, spills my milk,
roughens the silk
softens the ground, tightens the air
kills my hunger little wonder
strengthens the slumber
cheap thrills to your endless will
that gaze that devours
through my soul and empowers
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Sid John Gardner. 05 May 2009
Now this is what I call an 'Adult' (In the true sense) poem for 'Big Boys..(and girls) . Well done mate. Sid.
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Anjali Sinha 20 October 2008
Omar, really powerful words 'Entrapped in your web, torn and tangled worn out, drained and strangled then you'll know, all that you are facing is just a reflection of yourself gazing' this has left me gazing at the screen of the lappy. +++++10 and A+ regards anju
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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 September 2008
Ammmmazing poem indeed omar..............10
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Greenwolfe 1962 04 September 2008
I thought the writing of this was amazing. It was the kind of thing that captures the reader and holds them. Very impressive. GW62
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Ravi Sathasivam 30 August 2008
A poem with deep feelings and strong meaning. Expressed very well. I enjoyed.
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Sathyanarayana M V S 29 August 2008
This poem has great depths, expressed so well the inner feelings....well done.10
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Shalini Kts 25 August 2008
sometimes we like what we really don't understand and part of this poem is like that, its nice to read, but can understand and like the essence when i read it for the second time
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Chitra - 23 August 2008
fine piece! eloquent phrases used! and definitely thought stirring
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Dawn Slanker 21 August 2008
This poem, although seemingly haphazard at first with a kaleidoscope thought, actually begins to develope continuity as you read and reread it. It is also a fine example of alliteration and rhyme. It was fun to read, especially the second time around :)
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Ben Gieske 18 August 2008
The first stanza is what I liked best about this poem. It reads quickly and with a short, steady and repetitious rhythm each time with a punch. The combinations are great: glaring gaze grey - hunger little wonder slumber as well as the end rhymes.
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