The Last Sad Loss And Fall Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion
The Last Sad Loss And Fall
Being first in the race is so hard,
The frazzle may make you stumble;
If you're left alone at the tail end,
LAST means Learn About Standing Tall.
If you cry in distress and sorrow,
Lonely, torn, and due for repair;
Dry the tears in your eyes, for
SAD denotes Smile Away Despair.
When triumph seems so elusive,
Beat the defeat to be fearless;
Little did you know that
The LOSS means Lean On Sweet Success.
When highs turn into lows,
Grounded down under the cruel strife;
You'll find in your heart that
FALL stands for Fly Aiming Long Life.
Life is not always a walk in the park,
Before you rise reaching the goal,
Seek God's help first for you to
Endure the last sad loss and fall.
Amazing, really amazing. I loved your play with words and especially with the word fall. It means a lot to me and this is so positive! Beautiful :) I can relate so much. Thank you for commenting on mine :)
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Talk about inspirational and motivational! And fun! Great job, Bernard! ! ! A solid 10! ! ! !
Being first in the race is so hard, The frazzle may make you stumble; If you're left alone at the tail end, LAST means Learn About Standing Tall. Very clever poem, sir Bernard. I enjoyed it.
Being first in the race is so hard, The frazzle may make you stumble; Interesting first two lines, dear Ber....................
If you cry in distress and sorrow, Lonely, torn, and due for repair; Dry the tears in your eyes, for SAD denotes Smile Away Despair. I love this stanza, dear Bernard.........................
This piece is very clever and inspiring, Bernard...............
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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10/10/2024 8:05:24 AM # 1.0.0
Thank you for this poem very inspiring and cleverly written.
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