Bernard F. Asuncion

Gold Star - 286,747 Points (July 30,1967 / Subic, Philippines)

The Last Sad Loss And Fall - Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

Being first in the race is so hard,
The frazzle may make you stumble;
If you're left alone at the tail end,
LAST means Learn About Standing Tall.

If you cry in distress and sorrow,
Lonely, torn, and due for repair;
Dry the tears in your eyes, for
SAD denotes Smile Away Despair.

When triumph seems so elusive,
Beat the defeat to be fearless;
Little did you know that
The LOSS means Lean On Sweet Success.

When highs turn into lows,
Grounded down under the cruel strife;
You'll find in your heart that
FALL stands for Fly Aiming Long Life.

Life is not always a walk in the park,
Before you rise reaching the goal,
Seek God's help first for you to
Endure the last sad loss and fall.

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Quatrain

Comments about The Last Sad Loss And Fall by Bernard F. Asuncion

  • (6/15/2017 3:31:00 AM)

    very nice poem. thanks for sharing.
    Dinyar Bharucha.
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    Bernard F. Asuncion (6/15/2017 5:26:00 AM)

    Thanks, Dinyar... a big like 👍 to your comment...

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  • (5/14/2017 6:37:00 PM)

    Talk about inspirational and motivational! And fun! Great job, Bernard! ! ! A solid 10! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion (5/14/2017 7:18:00 PM)

    Thanks, Richard.... I just enjoy doing acronym and acrostic..... a big click to the green thumbs up sign! !

  • Cheryl Tutaan (4/26/2017 11:37:00 AM)

    Superb! Thats all i can say :) ...Thank you, Bernard :) Perfect 10 (Report) Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion (4/26/2017 7:05:00 PM)

    Thanks, CHE.... I'll treasure your kind comment....

  • Julie Smith (3/29/2017 4:36:00 PM)

    Amazing, really amazing. I loved your play with words and especially with the word fall. It means a lot to me and this is so positive! Beautiful :) I can relate so much. Thank you for commenting on mine :) (Report) Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion (3/30/2017 4:16:00 PM)

    Thanks, Julie.... I've just added you to the list of my friends.....

  • Godfrey Morris (8/27/2015 12:12:00 AM)

    Thank you for this poem very inspiring and cleverly written. (Report) Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion (3/30/2017 4:19:00 PM)

    Thank you so much, Godfrey.... I've treasured your comment for more than a year now....

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 26, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 31, 2018

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