Peace Poems: 87 / 500

The Last Time I Saw You...

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The last time I saw you,
You were lying in a coffin
As I bended over to kiss you for the last time
Yr cold, white skin nearly froze my lips
But the peace I felt was unusual
Like you were still around
Guiding me in the right direction
As though, I was a little bird
That G-d hasn't forgotten
The peace always will be you
Surrounding me with every breath

Tuesday, September 14, 2021
Peace Poems: 87 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: funeral,mother daughter
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 14 September 2021

Not exaggerating, I can generalize your endearing expression-But the peace I felt was unusual Like you were still around Guiding me in the right direction. A poem worthy of multiple visits.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 14 September 2021

Love is the only thing that lasts. This touchingly beautiful poem is in my List.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 September 2021

I am a bit emotional with this poem because my mother is in death bed.... she may leave me at anytime!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 September 2021

Sorry, my android commits a lot of typographical errors. Please read as: mother!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 September 2021

A poem loaded with love and emotions... it's great to remember someone who has always given you unconditional love.. only a matter can do it for her kids... great poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 September 2021

This brilliant poem touched my heart very much, I reread this again, like my own family this theme is about. A brilliant poem full of melancholy. Very touching!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 16 September 2021

Beautiful, but felt a lot of melancholic feelings as I dived into the flow.Thanks for sharing such a great poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 16 September 2021

A farewell so poignant! A Mother is a Mother! So loving! The spirit who guides! ....Top stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 16 September 2021

LeeAnn, dear Poetess.....a wonderful poem so emotional and touching!

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Nabakishore Dash 15 September 2021

Nice expression, touchy poem really.

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