**** The Legend *** Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

**** The Legend ***

Rating: 4.6


From the sofa I saw sweet Muffin
Naked on mirror
So raw of meats
Emits…
Wet market scents
Animal’s magnetism attracts
Desire drips onto guilty floor
Saliva crawls purging the urge
Oh heavenly piece…
Shall I do the squatting?
Scrutinizing the pearl of
Alaskan breed so silken…
Ooooops…there you are
Crystal clear eggs flowing…
I’ve not done anything yet…
Intimacy tells the tale
The legendary flow…
Your authentic love!
I’m amazed!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angeline Snowboy 24 October 2008

awsome i liked it! =) i enjoyd reading it!

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Brianna Wilshusen 23 October 2008

I like it, its different and irt shows your individuality. good job,9

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The Grandmother is Watching 22 October 2008

I quite enjoy your descriptive way of writing.

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Tim Woodhouse 22 October 2008

Poetic priapism! I secretly loved it, but please don't tell my wife that I visit these sites! She's convinced that I am pursuing academic research, which is true in a way.... Tim W.

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Katherine Sessor 22 October 2008

Great poem! I loved it, which i knew i would. =) A 10 for a great poem! Kat

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 January 2009

The extract from Kayla Nace's comment: Kayla Nace (10/21/2008 5: 18: 00 PM) THAT WAS AMAZING I GIVE IT A 10++ ^.^ ^.^

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Ben Gieske 16 December 2008

I find this a bit overwhelming. Such a powerful appealing to my senses.

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Kite Remedy 08 November 2008

Great works.. You can depict something so simple so beautifully.. Nice, Friends..

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Tsira Goge 01 November 2008

Sulaiman, Remarkably... Beautiful poems...10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Yasser Koor 26 October 2008

Ooooops nice poem i like it it is beautiful legendary I’m amazed!

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