Dave Alan Walker

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The Long Road - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Frozen in a moment of realisation
that we are living in a world created
by the price you have to pay

This is the long road

The Long road to tragedy

Topic(s) of this poem: life and death

Form: Free Verse


Comments about The Long Road by Dave Alan Walker

  • Mihaela PirjolMihaela Pirjol (11/5/2018 7:25:00 AM)

    A melancholic poem... but, let us enjoy the life we have been given, for there are great, great things we can be grateful about... (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (11/2/2018 2:07:00 PM)

    Earth! ! ! !

    To pay the price.

    Thanks for sharing.
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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (10/30/2018 1:51:00 PM)

    Wonderful creation...The Long road to tragedy. Interesting penning. (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (10/30/2018 12:33:00 AM)

    Dave, such a marvelous write........................... (Report)Reply

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  • Gajanan MishraGajanan Mishra (10/29/2018 7:54:00 PM)

    Long road to tragedy, fine write - philosophy (Report)Reply

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  • Aqua FlowerAqua Flower (10/29/2018 7:11:00 PM)

    This poem speaks volumes on the world we live in today....a world that we created and now have to pay the price. A true and sad reality. (Report)Reply

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (10/29/2018 6:56:00 PM)

    Good poem, Dave.
    The skies were dark and gloomy this morning and I was ready to get into a gloomy mood. But then I saw a tree in all its majestic beauty, shining its wonderful green against the grey skies, It suddenly made me believe again in the future. :) We can each contribute a small difference and turn around to the other end of the road.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 29, 2018



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