The Memory Of You Poem by Practicing Poetess

The Memory Of You

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Like a soft, warm breeze
The memory of you surfaces
Caressing my mind,
Like your fingers used to do
To my shoulders, back in time.


Awakening my mind
And filling it with images
Of pleasures long past
Now relived only in dreams
I'd hoped that they would last.

Sunday, March 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 10 April 2019

Awesome ...10+++ Like a soft, warm breeze The memory of you surfaces Caressing my mind, Like your fingers used to do To my shoulders, back in time.

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Practicing Poetess 14 April 2019

Thank you, Mohammed, for the 'Awesome' and the 10! : -)

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Jennifer Birchall 04 April 2019

Sometimes all we have are our memories. Beautifully written poem dear poetess.

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Practicing Poetess 04 April 2019

Thank you so much, Jennifer, for that lovely comment! : -)

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Kostas Lagos 24 March 2019

Awesome poem ! Love it

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Practicing Poetess 24 March 2019

Thanks so much, Kostas! : -)

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Louis Rams 24 March 2019

This is a touching write

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Practicing Poetess 24 March 2019

Thank you so much, Louis! : -) No pun intended when you said 'touching' (caressing) ? Haha!

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 March 2019

the memory of LOVE live for years as the genealogy!

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Practicing Poetess 24 March 2019

Yes Mahtab, Love never dies, and thoughts of love never die. It is so potent, that it etches itself on our memories forever! Thanks for commenting!

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