The Misty Mountain Comments

very intense and interesting look at dusk, i personally love the feel of the shadows that descend upon the word as the sun melts below the horizon its the time when all life on earth turns black and the stars where life originated shines brighter than our life on earth, cheers to twilight

Some lovely imagery.............

I live upon a misty mountain, I hope they do not find me. Magic writing

Imaginative tale again in poetic prose

A nicely penned poem from mountaineering experience. It is an expression of sincere feelings. Loved reading it. Keep it up. CP

A very nice write you have pieced together here, thank you for sharing it with us. Scott

Dan, I like this one. Regards Ron

AN inspiring poem it was brilliant great work

a very nice descriptive write..lovely.. Ency Bearis

Spooky.Nice read.Thanks

Living on a mountain I relate to these words very well.

Good use of imagery. Vivid style.

A very good poem much enjoyed

Wonderfully written! you are a very creative writer

Out of all of your poems, this one was my favorite. Such imagery, although the third verse is a tad shaky, it is great that you are this adept at such a young age. You are indeed a poet on the road to greatness.

A dark mood well expressed. Beware of the misty mountains, indeed. And praise for your rich imagination. Kind regards, Sandra

I see you becoming an iconic poet of your generation. Another one of your excellent writes. Keep it up. Excellent verse. Best wishes Suzan Gumush

I really like the part about the lightening striking the souls very cool. this is nicely written. I enjoyed it a lot. good job. Becca

i liked it, nice poem good work

Delicious combination of the outdoors and mystery. Great poem! A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn