The bright moon dances
with the turbulent ocean.
The waves adore her
and they jump to reach the sky.
But the moon joins the dark clouds.
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Very beautiful Rose-Marie thanks for sharin this bravo-worthy poem! ! ! !
Beautiful natural scenes depicted most poetically. Loved it. A tale of unrequited love! Nice. Interesting Top score.
Perfect, just perfect! All that will read will be permanently struck by the intense beauty and imagery of this poem and its immortal nature.A favorite for all! ,
The bright moon, the turbulent ocean, the jumping waves - all dance together in this beautiful poem. Top score and beyond
Deeply heart moving and deeply beautiful! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++
Makes me feel like I'm standing alone on the shore of a beach, watching the world passing in front of me! ..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A captivating mysterious Tanka, leaves me searching.