The Naked Truth Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

The Naked Truth

Rating: 4.2


Have you ever wondered?
Why the Sun sets, from the east?
It’s the sign, where I leave my heart,
For the Sun to relay it to you,
In the west
Ad nauseam, the night is where
I leave my eyes to capture you
Like a Lapis Lazuli
You shine the brightest
Amongst the stars

On Earth
I’d be the Botanist
You’re the Campanula
And Knapweed
Fecundating, I grow you
To be closer
To me
You seem very buxom


I’m not here to adjudicate
You’re ineffable
I’ve become the malapropism
I want you
Like the river needs
The ocean
Like the moon needs
The night
We’re conjoined twins

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marissa Hollis 19 August 2009

this piece is very pure and real. it was a pleasure to read. It has inspired me.it showed me that life can be great and wonderful. you very much sulaiman. you are a great help.

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Rhiannon Scase 17 August 2009

A lot of words didn't really make sense but 'I want you Like the river needs The ocean Like the moon needs The night We’re conjoined twins' Is brilliant :)

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David Child 28 July 2009

What; , , ? 'Fecundating, I grow you To be closer To me You seem very buxom' >>>>>>> You seem to mix words a bit; the rest of the poem made sense but these lines are confusing; ; ..! Pls explain... cheers Dave

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raff rafael 28 July 2009

Your poem shows the desires a person has for the word love. Some people are afraid of love, but those who dreams to find it can say this poem is their letter in a bottle from their journey of finding love. Godbless your passion and keep on writing for those who cant find the right words to say about their desires.

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that is a sweet wonderful poem filled by passionated and sensual thoughts

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Romeo Della Valle 03 July 2011

I take my hat off for you my brother, long time! I am speechless with this impressive masterpiece. Very simple and at the same time, very deep! This is a very catchy title. I also wrote a poem titled: A NAKED TRUTH, a different interpretation on the same subject. My brother, keep inspiring the World with your thought provoking writes! 10+++ Well deserved! Love and Peace for always!

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Elysabeth Faslund 14 October 2009

An unusual love poem indeed...old souls having found the other. Why is a sunrise necessary...you have her eyes. Why is a sunset necessary...the darkness is made Light with your love. This poem speaks many things, and that is what a good poem does.xxxElys

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Alandra Moreira 11 October 2009

a meaningful write... thank you.

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Anand Madhukar 22 September 2009

A good write with well chosen words.

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Rachel Butler 21 September 2009

I’m not here to adjudicate You’re ineffable I’ve become the malapropism I want you Rachel Ann Butler

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