The Power Of The Mind Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Power Of The Mind

Rating: 5.0


The mind
Can create a wonderland
It shows magic
And wonders.

The mind
Can create a prison cell
It makes illusions
And traps you into the dark.

The mind is powerful
You can be with the stars and the moon
Or in the dark and gray clouds
Of an oncoming storm.


Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan- Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 11 June 2019

The mind is powerful, you are absolutely right, dear Mrs.Juan-Austin as your last stanza says. Marvelous poem, excellently worded. I have enjoyed very much your powerful and strong creation. This precious and important poem has its own style and format, I so admired: elegant and unique, as only you can do, dear great poetess!

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Kevin Patrick 09 June 2019

Rose I am glad you have shared this, its inspirational its given me a few ideas.

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Kevin Patrick 09 June 2019

I LOVE the contrasting natures of the first two stanzas, in my mind (no pun intent) its signifying the inherent duality of human mental capacity, between the vast searing horizons of dreams and ambitions, and the crashing inferno tombs of our fears and nightmares. The mind can be a haven or a cage, as you so eloquently put it. Then in the last stanza you unite the theme by telling the reader it is our choice to make a heaven or a.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 June 2019

A fantastic poem, dear Ate Rose.......10++++++++++++++

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 June 2019

Yeah, you are right. One's happiness and sorrow are hidden in mind. If you are strong in mind nothing can deter you from having a good live. So nice. Thanks.

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Rob Lamberton 23 August 2025

The power of thought! Well crafted!

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Nabakishore Dash 16 May 2022

Mind is all powerful, can create and destroy. Wonderful expression Rose Mam.

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Kesav Easwaran 09 March 2020

It is the mind that matters. It can make or mar any situation in life. The all powerful unseen organ. Much insightful poem 10+

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 November 2019

The mind/Can create a prison cell/It makes illusions/And traps you into the dark......so true! Appreciated your brilliant expression..............................................10/10

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Anjandev Roy 30 August 2019

Wonderful poem. Wisely penned.Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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