She imprisoned him
At the core of her being
In her heart and mind
Yet she is devoid of joy
Without life and without light.
Copyright 2023, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
To imprison, or be imprisoned, is an injustice to both parties. The awareness, if acted upon, leads to freedom. And freedom...leads to joy.
A succinct gem of a piece. A forced love cannot bring happiness. A fact that is quite common in the world. Often relationships are troubled.
none can build an abode of love forcefully; nonce can make a conjugal life forcefully; nice to read
Free him not let him be a prisioner! The choice is yours. Nice Tanka poem, Rose Marie
Meaningful Tanka.Imprusonment makes one unhappy though it is in a cage made of gold
It sounds like my wife! : )))))))))))))))))))))
The ending phrase reminds once again how the heart remains. Well wrtten piece
Such love/sorrow only hurting both of them... When love should be free, compassionate and kind...
An ever so heart moving poem that's ever so sad! .. Brilliantly expressed! .. Definite Definite 10 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
2) Very sad, but greatly insightful piece of poetic writing.