The Prisoner - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin
The Prisoner - Tanka
She imprisoned him
At the core of her being
In her heart and mind
Yet she is devoid of joy
Without life and without light.
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To imprison, or be imprisoned, is an injustice to both parties. The awareness, if acted upon, leads to freedom. And freedom...leads to joy.
2) Very sad, but greatly insightful piece of poetic writing.
All creatures were meant to be free. Stirring, powerful and brilliantly written.
Meaningful Tanka.Imprusonment makes one unhappy though it is in a cage made of gold
The ending phrase reminds once again how the heart remains. Well wrtten piece
Such love/sorrow only hurting both of them... When love should be free, compassionate and kind...
An ever so heart moving poem that's ever so sad! .. Brilliantly expressed! .. Definite Definite 10 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/27/2024 12:19:11 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A succinct gem of a piece. A forced love cannot bring happiness. A fact that is quite common in the world. Often relationships are troubled.