The Ring Poem by Pushpinder Kaur

The Ring

Rating: 4.5


THE RING

My mother's soul threw her
Ring
In my path…a miracle in troth
It was the key to Pandora's box
And the ensuing wrath.

Out flowed many evils
Unraveling hidden devils
the eye had never seen;
the mind beguiled, to have left them unseen.

Out flowed many evils…
But, there also flew out Hope
Reviving love, loyalty and life with Hope
Cleansing away the scars that had wreaked out perils…

For my Mother's sweet abode to be lit up with HOPE.


Mrs. Pushpinder Kaur 29.9.19

The Ring
Saturday, September 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love,loyalty,miracle,mother
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The miracle incident of falling upon my Mother's ring indeed let out many evils but also, HOPE!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kingsley Egbukole 29 September 2019

A beautiful poem. Kingsley Egbukole

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 February 2020

A wonderful poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece.......10++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 25 February 2020

the Ring Reviving love, loyalty and life with Hope Cleansing away the scars that had wreaked out perils… For my Mother's sweet abode to be lit up with HOPE. The Ring Reviving Hope newly beautiful poem penned; enjoyed/ congrats for being selected this poem as POD

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 February 2020

How sweetest is this Sonnet, dear poetess. WOW! The only thing that will never be erased or washed away is HOPE. What a magnificent poem in bringing out HOPE. With you, I bet, your dear Mother will be present constantly all th time, since you love to observe and remember, you love her so much that your words are soaring between reality and imagination. A very precious poem for a beloved Mother. CONGRATULATIONS as the MPOTD.

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Chinedu Dike 25 February 2020

A poignant bit of verse, well conceived and nicely penned from the heart. A beautiful creation.

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Lyn Paul 25 February 2020

Hope is a survivor. A beautiful poem chosen today.

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Rajnish Manga 25 February 2020

Unlike Pandora's Box, your mother's ring turned to be paradoxical. Nicely articulated poem. Thanks and Congrats.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 February 2020

Ring of hope! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 February 2020

Out flowed many evils/Unraveling hidden devils/the eye had never seen/the mind beguiled, to have left them unseen....brilliantly expressed! Many congratulations for this magnificent piece of work being selected as Poem of the Day!

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Pushpinder Kaur

Pushpinder Kaur

Amritsar, Punjab, India
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