ONE god created the world
TWO eyes to read the word
THREE daughters for king Lear
FOUR seasons in a year
FIVE fingers in the hand
SIX musicians made a band
SEVEN days in one week
EIGHT boys played hide and seek
NINE planets around the sun
TEN hundred kilos equal a ton
dedicated to the great poet: (HASMUKH AMATHALAL)
february.2009, by: Omar Ibrahim
if you want to use this poem feel free to e-mail me at: ([email protected]) before using it.....thanks for reading
I really like this poem.....creative thinking..10+++++++++++++++
Yes first poem I read here is so cute....I can to learn it my grandson :)
Great! The poem reminds me of Kindergarten. Like twinkle Twinkle L'il Star. Creativity was employed and learning exhibited. Omar, you are a wonderful poet.
attractive from the first line. i wish i could became a child once again =)
Well achieved apart from EIGHT and TEN which I found a little weak!
Really fabulous! ! ! Really inspirational! ! ! You have given me great thoughts about writing a new poem... Thanks a lot for such a masterpiece
Beautiful composition …but this numbering different in my mother Land… by 1 Moon 2 Lunar cycle [new moon and full moon] 3 eyes [2 plus third eye] 4 Vedas and so on… Thanks 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
oh my! what an intelligent BOY! i really think you can do more than this, SO KEEEEEEEEP WRITING! ! ! ! I LUVVV THIS!