The Storm (My Face Book Post) (C) 5-19-2010 Poem by Zahir Kijani
The Storm (My Face Book Post) (C) 5-19-2010
The rain and thunder and lightning is such a wondrous feat given to us by the almighty.
The lightning lights up the sky like a divine show of fireworks
With the sound of the rejoining of the air,
While the rain sprinkles onto the ground as a symbol of grace and cleanliness...
Too bad I'm scared of it
Wednesday, May 19, 2010
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4/26/2024 11:53:12 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Dear Corey, Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem.I find that you are too busy with your school and of course, writing poems. I have chosen one of your recent poems and find that you have potential. May I take the liberty of re-writing your poem without deviating from your ideas.? This is just a suggestion You may take it or toss it. REDRAFTED STORM The rain, thunder and lightning are such gifts of God overwhelming divine show of fireworks, sound of the air rejoining; Rain sprinkles on the ground, symbol of grace and cleaning; Never know why am I scaring. Hope it helps. Rated at 7 Rajkumar