The Time Stabs Me Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

The Time Stabs Me

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I'm the existence
from one drop of love
on this earth

from the nothingness
I'm embodied, a visible form
in the cage of time

in the reign of time
sometimes I defile my embodiment
forgetting it's kingship

the time stabs continuously
to remind the void erroneous body
but I'm stupefied

the time stabs continuously
but no scope to leave it
or to live without it!


-September 23,2019 Chattogram

Monday, September 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: kingdom,leadership,power,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
from my comment on "It Was Winter When It Rained" by Angela Bontle Ditumiso 9/23/2019 5: 00: 00 AM)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 September 2019

from one drop of love in one drop there are millions of X AND Y SPERMS you just need 1/1000000000000000 million to become a man or woman for man ask dad for active Y and by now you know why I like your comments sonny boy @33 u must do it more often lie

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Valsa George 16 October 2019

No one can escape the stab of time. We are continuously bound by time! A philosophical reflection of time and its effect on man! A powerful write!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 October 2019

, , , , .....PL READ MY CDN SERIES. .EXAMPLE POEM our third one should by next October be due what a lovely autumn it will be can you imagine like me

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 September 2019

Time waits for no one! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rus Mer 29 September 2019

the time stabs continuously to remind the void erroneous body but I'm stupefied the time stabs continuously but no scope to leave it or to live without it! .................. uh haaa the rats of time is killing me....another master piece too

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Kostas Lagos 24 September 2019

Almost perfect Mahtab!

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